First, I’d like to thank the poets from the previous month’s challenges. I’ve enjoyed reading your poems in 2021! For December, we’ll write poems about the equinox, solstice, or change of seasons in English or Spanish. The form for this month will be the Flamenca.
Reto poético de diciembre 2021 Primero, quiero agradecer a los poetas que participaron en los retos poéticos de los meses anteriores. Disfruté mucho de leer sus poemas en 2021. Para diciembre, escribiremos poemas sobre el equinoccio, el solsticio o el cambio de estaciones en español o en inglés. La forma poética este mes es la Flamenca.
What is a Flamenca poem? The form comes from the Flamenco songs of the Roma people. The structure is a quintain; five lines. The number of syllables; 6-6-5-6-6. Challenging bit: The second and fifth verses share assonance; the rhyming of stressed vowels (equinox; thought) or words with the same consonant and a different vowel (night; naught). This was a new subtlety that took a bit of concentration to resolve, but was fun to try.
¿Qué es una Flamenca? La forma viene de la música flamenca del Pueblo Roma. La estructura del poema es un quintilla; 5 líneas. El número de sílabas; 6-6-5-6-6. El desafío: El segundo y el quinto verso tienen asonancia; el rima de vocales en la sílaba tónica (equinoccio; meditación), o uso del mismo consonante con una vocal diferente (noche/niche). Esta regla tiene una sutileza que requiere un poco de concentración para resolverla, pero fue divertido intentarlo.
Example:
Flamenca
Our winter equinox
Swiftly brings darkness too
While each culture makes
Light filled celebrations
Candle burns, hope renews.
–Rebecca Cuningham, 6 December 2021
Traducción:
Flamenca
Equinoccio invernal
trae oscuridad
cada cultura con
su festival de luz
Renace la esperanza.
–Rebecca Cuningham, 6 diciembre 2021
El tema es el equinoccio, el solsticio o el cambio de estaciones. Favor de escribir un poema para todas las audiencias. Los escritores que tengan su propio sitio web, favor de publicar tu poema en tu blog y haz un enlace a este artículo antes del 12 deciembre. Los escritores que sean damas y caballeros andantes, favor de añadir tu poema a los comentarios abajo antes del 12 deciembre. Publicaré un artículo con todos los poemas el próximo martes, 14 diciembre. ¡Inscríbete! ¡Gracias y feliz proceso de escribir! ¡Olé! –Rebecca
Your theme is the equinox, solstice, or change of seasons. Please make a G-rated poem. If you are a blogger, please publish your poem on your website and link to this page by Sunday, 12 December. If you are a poet at large, please post your poem below by 12 December. I will publish a post with all your poems next Tuesday, 14 December. Come join in! Thank you and happy writing! ¡Olé! –Rebecca
To see the poems, click the title below. Para ver los poemas, haz un clic en el título abajo.

Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for commenting, Olivia. Hope you will join the poetry challenge!
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Thank you Rebecca. A challenging challenge, and you have already set the bar!
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Thank you, Margaret! I look forward to your poem. 🙂
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Me encanta tu poema en español. LAs líneas fluyen como agua ondulante.
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Muchas gracias, Suzette! Muy agradecida. Espero ver tu poema para el Reto poético este mes, en español o en inglés. : )
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In English for sure. My Spanish is not that great in which to wax poetic😊
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Great, I’m interested in your thoughts about the season. Especially, living far north as you do. : )
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Oh yes. The cold blankets the landscape here with so much sparkle. 🙂
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That can be so beautiful. You already have snow?
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Lots of snow…yes
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Excellent, I love how it sparkles. Makes the days so much brighter.
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Yes! So true.
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I can’t write poetry in one language, much less in two! I’m quite impressed. Thank you for the explanation of Flamenca poetry.
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Well, Janet, you are a good writer of prose in English. I bet you’d be better at poetry than you think. Thanks for your support and kind words.
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This is the first time I’m learning about the Flamenca poem. You do an amazing job in translating the English version to Spanish while maintaining the form and assonance. That’s not easy.
Look forward to the response 🙂
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Thanks for your comments, Rosaliene. I’ve found my love for poetry has grown deeper in the last year and a half I’ve been hosting the challenges. The poets have written thought provoking and deep verses. I have enjoyed working on my own translations as a way to expand my Spanish vocabulary and practice my writing in Castellano. Gracias.
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When I light a candle tonight, I’ll remember “hope renews.”
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Thank you, Neal. Happy 8th night of Hanukkah!
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Maybe I’ll try, although it would be quite hard for me to join the spirit of flamenco… I’m not so intense 🙂
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Glad to hear you might try!
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To a Distant Friend
Winter has brought new fears
new covids, colds, and flu
will our jabs hold up?
can I hug at Christmas?
Will I get to see you?
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Thanks, Kim! Congratulations on the first poem for the new month’s challenge. Very nicely done and topical for the season.
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Bit depressing though! Not where I started from but where ehe poem wanted to go! 😉
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Writing does have a mind of its own, as the person with the pen channels the universe…or strives to listen.
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Yup!
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Oh, very topical, and echoing my thoughts too. It’s not too easy, this Flamenca, is it?
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I struggled! I’d rather dance Flamenco!
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That would be a fun zoom party, dancing flamenco!
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Yes! I’ve had eating, drinking, and cooking Zoom parties, but no dancing ones yet……..
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Hmm…wheels turning… I’ll think about how we could do that. 🙂
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Looks expectant……. 🙂
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Not easy, but you both wrote excellent poems!
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Ah, Rebecca – it’s been the busiest of weeks, and today, for the first time in months we’ll be with Team Spain – my (English) daughter, and her (Spanish) partner, and their baby, my granddaughter. So I haven’t had much time and will have even less to think about trying to write poetry. So here is a first attempt. Flamenca’s a form that interests me, so I’ll give it a better go some time after Christmas.
It’s winter solstice time,
the stark time of the year:
darkest drear long nights.
Then festivals arrive
and stars and light and cheer.
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Dear Margaret, thank you so much for participating despite your busy schedule with your daughter’s family! Give them Saludos from Wisconsin please. 🙂 Your Flamenca is very nicely done, including the assonance! I like the themes and range of emotions you expressed. Felices fiestas!
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Oh, I really like this one! Well done!
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Love it when poets support one another. Thanks!
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Hello Rebecca<
Here is my little submission. Hope it meets the guidelines. Have a great day.
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December arrives—
a winter flambeau
with an artic wick
escorting sub-zero’s
crystal chariot of snow
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Hello Suzette, Thanks for participating in the December poetry challenge! I like the descriptions and images. Crystal chariot of snow is wonderful. Nice subtle assonance with the 2nd and 5th lines. Gracias, Rebecca
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My pleasure! Thank you for intoducing me to this challenging poetic form. I enjoyed it!
Happy Friday.
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Great ryhme of flambeau with snow!
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Thank you😊
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Thanks, Kim. I think so too! I appreciate your kind, community building comments on your sister poets’ poems.
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Thank you Rebecca.
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Darkness and more darkness
snow falling from gray sky
zenith to nadir
earth spun again around
candles dance warm; time’s fly.
(not sure if I pinged https://artieandstu.wordpress.com/2021/12/12/sun-stands-still/)
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Thank you, Artie and Stu! You capture well the essence of the season. Nice Flamenca.
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Hello and Happy Winter! Here´s my contribtion (suggestions are accepted)
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Thank you for your dual poetry! I appreciate your participation in the challenge. Beautiful words in both languages. Am I correct that your complete name is Mar Martínez Leonard and you are from Spain? Gracias, Rebecca
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That is correct, although I am a US resident 😊 thank you for your words
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Gracias, Mar. Por eso hablas el español e inglés perfectamente. 🙂
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a nice challenge REbecca! I doubt I am clever enough to take the challenge up though! Nothings coming to mind as I type this lol!
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Thanks, Carol Anne. Hope to see you next time.
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