Welcome to the Fake Flamenco May Poetry Challenge! In April, brave writers wrote wonderful poems using a brand new form, Prime (Number) Verse. This month we’ll write in free verse, up to 14 lines. We will describe a mystery person, place or thing without naming it. Then our readers will try to guess what we’ve portrayed. See details after the example poem.
¡Bienvenidos al Reto poético de Fake Flamenco! En abril, los escritores valiosos crearon poemas maravillosos usando una forma nueva, Verso número primo. Este mes escribiremos en verso libre, hasta 14 líneas. Describiremos una persona, lugar o cosas sin nombrarlo. Entonces, nuestros lectores intentarán adivinar lo que hemos retratado. Ve los detalles después del poema de ejemplo.

Example: Mystery Poem
Joyous sentinel
lining the walk
yellow garbed
hooded cloak
stationary dancer
taking a bow
head covered
pretty bonnet
ready for a sunny day
great-grandmother calls
from a saffron phone
wish you’d visit us
more than one week in May.
–Rebecca Cuningham
Did you guess what it was? Write your answer in the comments.
Ejemplo: Poema misteriosa
Centinela alegre
a la orilla de la vereda
atuendo amarillo
capa con capucha
bailador estacionario
doblándose
cabeza cubierta
por capota linda
bisabuela nos llama
por un telefono azafrán
deseamos que nos visitas
más de una semana de mayo.
–traducción de Rebecca Cuningham
¿Lo adivinaste? Escribe tu respuesta en los comentarios más adelante.
The Challenge
Write a free verse poem, up to 14 lines about a mystery person, place or thing in English or Spanish, deadline: Sunday 5/08, noon CST. G-rated please. If you are a blogger, please publish your poem on your website with the hashtag #ffpoemapop and link to this page by 5/08. If you are a poet at large, please post your poem below by April 8. I’ll publish a post with your poems next Tuesday, May 10!
El reto poético
Escribe un poema, hasta 14 líneas sobre un misterio; persona, lugar o cosa en español o en inglés, fecha de entrega: el domingo 8 mayo, mediodía (Chicago). Para todas las audiencias por favor. Los escritores que tengan su propio sitio web, favor de publicar tu poema en tu blog con la etiqueta #ffpoemapop y haga un enlace a este artículo antes del 8 mayo. Los escritores que sean damas y caballeros andantes, favor de añadir tu poema a los comentarios abajo antes del 8 mayo. ¡Publicaré un artículo con sus poemas el próximo martes,10 mayo!
¡Gracias! ¡Olé! –Rebecca

A lovely verse. I’m wondering – Welsh poppy (Papaver cambricum)? I’m going to be travelling between now and mid-next week, so given that I still haven’t risen to last month’s challenge (I will, I will!) I’m not sure whether I’ll deliver. But I start out with a long train journey tomorrow, so let’s see if that gives me a chance to get creative.
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Welsh poppy is a good guess, looks beautiful hadn’t seen one before I searched it today. I planted a hint among the flowers in the post. 😉 Happy train travel, hope it inspires a May mystery poem. Where are you off to? 🙂
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Wait and see, Rachel. Wait and see. It’s very exciting.
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Look forward to hearing all about it! -Rebecca
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😉
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Interesting idea, sadly most of my favorite poets are busy with something or the other, otherwise they would have participated.
Great share
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Thanks for your comments, Devang. Still thinking of joining in?
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I’m incapable of writing poem mam. As you might have seen my niche 😅
But, I know few people who can, I will tell them about this wonderful idea.
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Thank you for spreading the word, Devang. 🙂
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Beautiful poem Rebecca. Has a peaceful mood to the imagery. I.love it.
My guess…Daffodil
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Thank you, Suzette. A friend held an online meditation meeting for creatives and in our work time these words sprung to mind. Your guess is petal to the metal 😉
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Awesome!
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It really was, I’m enjoying the class very much.
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👍
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Lovely poem and poetry form, Rebecca.
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Thank you, Miriam. Care to join in? 🙂
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Ah, what an interesting poem and puzzle! My guess is daffodil!
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Thanks, Wynne. Astute guess.
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Daffodil! Preferably in a host……. 🙂
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A host?
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She is so often present
as the sun makes its
daily retreat, we
imagine she is
mysterious as
she hides or
does she take
refuge in the shadows.
Only a few
have truly seen her
and they only speak
of her luminescent
alter ego.
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Thanks, Lou. Good mystery poem!
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Fun challenge, Rebecca! I’ll have to put on my thinking cap!
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Thanks, Marsha. Look forward to your poetic riddle.
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So much poetry in your neck of the woods! My childhood friend, Ronnie Hess, just put this https://www.wfop.org update on Facebook :
“Great panel at the WFOP Conference on getting the word out, featuring James Roberts Roberts Gillian Nevers Bruce Dethlefsen and Jerod Santek.”
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Thanks for the link. I was aware of the WFP when I moved to Madison, but I had lost track of the organization. Looks like an excellent group.
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This sounds like fun! Thanks, Rebecca. ✍🏻😁
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Great, Michele. Looking forward to your word spinning. 🙂
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That turned out beautifully.
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Thank you very much, Sheri. I appreciate the compliment.
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You’re very welcome, Rebecca.
Thank you for sharing it.🌹
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Hello Rebecca,
Thank you for another fun challenge this month. Here is my link. Have a great weekend. Cheers
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Thanks, Suzette! Look forward to puzzling the mystery you present.
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Excellent!
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Thank you, Britta. I’ll have fun reading your poetry today.
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Here’s mine: https://oddsends707138946.wordpress.com/2022/05/07/a-thought-by-britta-benson/
Thanks for the challenge, Rebecca!
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Thanks for participating, Britta!
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Thanks for making the challenges so interesting! I also really, really enjoy reading the poems in Spanish, afterwards. There is just something about reading my own words in another language. Spanish isn’t my go to language of choice, I speak it, but not well enough to create in it. So thanks to your translations, I can improve my Spanish one poem at a time. Thanks!
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You may choose to consider this an ode
to the woman who appears in the night
who, despite the distance, invites our sight
we hoping for a smile to be bestowed
that we might then return to our abode
and offer prayers she regains her birthright
and sits upon her earthly throne, her plight
forgotten, no longer to forebode.
But we know that she will not soon return,
her smile replaced by an anger she holds
tightly until the sun has arisen
and in dawn’s first light she will spurn
your requests that you behold
a queen in her celestial prison.
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Second Last Line should read: your requests that you may again behold
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Thanks for mystery free verse poem for the challenge!
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Well shoot! Missed this opportunity! But now that I am in the know, I will be geared up and ready for the next challenge!
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Next month 🙂
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A productive week in which I neglected to post this: https://artieandstu.wordpress.com/2022/05/13/please-dont-tell-me/
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Secrets and mysteries! Thanks for your poem. 🙂
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This is lovely–it makes me want to write a poem. But I am truly horrible when it comes to poetry. I’ll just stick to reading them 🙂
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Thanks for your comments. I encourage people to try writing a poem because in many cases it’s about viewpoint and self expression rather than rhyming. But we like appreciative audiences too!
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