This month, our theme is ocean creatures. For example, write a short poem about your favorite crustacean, cephalopod (octopus or squid), or cetacean; (whale, porpoise or dolphin). Teach us something new about the creature. What is unique about it? How it is particularly suited to aquatic life? G Rated please. Poet’s choice for the poetic form. I’ll translate poems that are fewer than 10 lines or 50 words. I’ll begin with two examples.
Grandmother Whale
The deepest basses
rumbled their song
to catch me in
their sonic net
The chorus of suitors
brought waves of sound
singing a prelude to
our dance of love.
–Rebecca Cuningham, 3 April 2023

Reto poético abril 2023
Este mes enfocamos en las criaturas del mar. Por ejemplo, escribe un poema sobre los crustáceos, los cefalópodos (pulpos y calamares), o cetáceos ( delfines y ballenas). Enséñanos algo nuevo sobre el animal. ¿Cómo es único? ¿Cómo está particularmente adaptado a la vida acuática? Para todas las audiencias por favor. L@s poetas escogen la forma este mes. Traduciré los poemas con menos de 10 líneas o 50 palabras en total. Empezaré con dos ejemplos.
Ballena abuela
Los bajos mas profundos
retumbaron su canción
para pescarme con
una red sónica.
En coro los pretendientes
formaban olas de sonido
cantando un preludio de
nuestro baile de amor.
–Rebecca Cuningham, 3 abril 2023

Echo your Location
Click, squeak, go
my phonic lips
by the fish bladder shape
I know my prey
seeing my dinner
through dark depths
with sound.
–Rebecca Cuningham, 3 April 2023
Eco su localizacion
Clic, chirrido, producen
mis labios fónicos
para detectar el contorno del pez
por su vajiga natatoria
viendo mi cena
en la oscuridad del mar
por el sonido.
–Rebecca Cuningham, 3 abril 2023
Fecha de entrega
Tienes hasta el domingo 9 abril para colocar tu poema en los comentarios abajo o en tu sitio web con un enlace. Favor de usar la etiqueta: ffpoemapop. El 11 abril publicaré los poemas y sus traducciones. ¡Acompáñanos!
Important Dates
You have until Sunday, April 9 at noon CST to add your poem to the comments below or on your website with a link here. Please use the challenge tag: ffpoemapop. Poems and translations into Spanish or English will be published April 11. Join us!
¡Olé! –Rebecca
I enjoyed the poems and it felt I was out there experiencing those magnificent whales and here’s to keeping them safe from us humans.
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Thank you, Suzanne! Yes, since whaling was banned, humpback whale numbers have increased from 200 to 20,000. 🙂
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Well here in Spain, the octopi and squid I’m most likely to see are on the fishmonger’s slab, sadly. Let’s see… I love your own offerings!
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I agree. Octopi are amazingly intelligent creatures.
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Yes, I’ve come to appreciate that more recently after watching a documentary and reading about them.
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Thank you, Margaret. Yes, live ocean creatures are preferred 😉
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What a good idea. I love your poems.
Here’s my poem. Just over the 10 lines, or 59 words, I’m afraid!
‘Shark’ comes the cry.
A triangular fin passes by.
The swimmers all flee
Leaving the sea.
But there’s nothing to fear.
Just a basking shark near
With wide open jaw
Catching plankton, nothing more.
For he has no teeth
As he swims beneath.
So no need to fear
When he swims too near.
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Thanks, VW. Great shark poem! Which kind of shark is it? Good to know some eat plankton.
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It’s called a basking shark and is fairly common around UK shores. Totally harmless, although big.
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Cool, glad to learn about a species I hadn’t heard of before.
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Great words and love the way you’ve matched the photos with your words.
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Much appreciated!
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This is lovely. Thanks for this opportunity.
The Blue Lobster
In the depths of the sea, a sight so rare,
A blue lobster swims with a regal air,
Its hue so striking, a wonder to behold,
A creature of beauty, a sight to unfold.
Blue lobsters are unique, a genetic surprise,
Their blue coloration, a trait that defies,
With claws so strong, they roam wild and free,
A true marvel of nature, a gift from the sea.
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Thanks, Ann Sharon! I learned something new. I didn’t know there were blue lobsters. That’s really cool. Welcome to the Poetry Challenge!
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A small boy I saw – and heard – has just given me an idea. Watch this space!
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Thanks, Margaret. Looking forward!
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Beautiful!!!
Looking forward to this challenge.
Best wishes RC
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Thanks, Devang. Who is your favorite ocean creature?
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Tbh I haven’t seen any ocean creature in my life. 😦
But soon, someday
More than 80% of the ocean is not discovered yet. So just imagine how many species must be there 😁
I believe dinosaur live in ocean
Crocodile count as ocean creature?
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Hi Devang, I haven’t seen whales in person, but I’ve seen lots of videos. I think crocs are mostly fresh water.
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Haiku
Pools among the rocks
Trap creatures as the tide ebbs:
Limpets, mussels, crabs.
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Brief, yet it captures an entire tidepool world. Very nice, Sarah!
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Really love the idea of this challenge, Rebecca. Will do my best to contribute (on time and w/in the word count). 😁
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Thanks, Michele. Hope the two extra days for this challenge gives you enough time. 🙂
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Well, hello “phonic lips”! Delightful! I need a little time to think about a haiku on the other recent whale story from my blog.
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Yes, it did inspire poetry and a whole poetry challenge. Thanks to you!
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PS Reminding WI friends to vote!
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Thanks, we just returned from our polling place. We did our bit. 🙂
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What a great theme!
I love that you chose whales.
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OK, Rebecca, this is about the Bryde’s whale discoveries. .Apologies to Lewis Carroll.
How doth the little baleen whale
Display his shining tail
And pour the waters on the sea
On every human sail.
How cheerfully he overturns
The oceanic laws
And welcomes little fishes in
With strangely angled jaws.
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Great, thanks for your whale of a contribution. I learned about another whale species.
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Hi Rebecca,
Here’s my effort
http://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2023/04/06/the-amazing-seahorse-april-poetry-challenge/
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I love seahorses. Thanks for your poem!
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Thanks Rebecca! They are very unique and unusual creatures
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Phew! My Spanish Sojourn is lots of fun, but energetic days with a full-of-life two year old don’t leave much down-time.
Octopus
The small boy
coming home from school
dances ahead of his gran, delighted.
‘Es pulpo para la cena!’.
So – he loves octopus.
Let’s hope he cares enough
when older to leave them be –
to swim, spawn, hunt and make a meal
for eels and fish and albatross and whales.
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Thanks, Margaret for the very Spanish scene and bilingual to boot! Likewise, I learned in Spain that pulpo is tasty. Much later I found out how smart they are.
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Exactly! Now I no longer fancy eating a creature who’s probably brainier than me!
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Perhaps brainier than all of us, with a mind of its own in each of eight tentacles!
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Hi Rebecca. Here’s my take https://graceofthesun.com/sea-canaries/
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Love it, Grace! Thanks for participating 🙂
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Truly my pleasure, Rebecca.💕
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I present to you my contribution on the topic of “The Sharpear Enope Squid.”
https://theinkwelljourney.blogspot.com/2023/04/the-sharpear-enope-squid.html
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Welcome to Fake Flamenco! Thanks for your squid poem, that’s a very cool animal!
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Hello Rebecca,
Thank you for the poetry challenge. Here’s one poem:
https://www.deviantart.com/fairchildart/art/Teacup-Octopus-543134599
Pardon me,
but where’s my hot tea?
Black, white, green–
I am blue blood, see?
Balloon eyes
and head-feet physique,
I advise–
octopodes–not octopi!
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Very apt description in your poem and awesome art on your site of the octopus! May I have permission to include the art with your poem on Tuesday in my post?
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Hi Rebecca,
Thank you for enjoying my poem. Yes, you may have my permission to include both in your Tuesday post. — C
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Thank you! Looking forward to it.
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Hi Rebecca 🐣,
Thank you for choosing my work for your publication. –C
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Hello Rebecca,
Here is my piece.
http://suzetteb.home.blog/2023/04/08/landing-butterflies-a-haiga/
Happy Easter! Cheers
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Happy Easter, Suzette! Thanks for your poem teaming with life. 🐟 🐠
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Thank you for the opportunity, Rebecca.
Here is my poetic contribution, inspired by the incredible rescue of JJ the gray whale, who I had the great fortune of seeing (through a tank) before she was released back to the wild. 💙
Tossed and alone, an abandoned babe
found in the waves near L.A.
Nurtured and fed by a dedicated team,
giving her a chance to survive in the wild.
Fourteen months later, weighing 19,000 pounds,
JJ the orphaned gray whale was able
to return to the waves.
To her home.
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What an uplifting story! Thanks for your poem about it. So cool you got to see her. We have a great menagerie of ocean creature poems now. 🙂
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It truly is an uplifting story! 🐳 It was a quick write – hope it’s ok. 😆 She was amazing! Her “baby” bottle was at least twice my size. A wonderful rescue story.
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I like its celebration of life and that the wonderful creature was saved.
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🐳💙🙌🏻
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