Looking forward to our online poetry soirée for May! This month we will write a haiku (5/7/5 syllables) using the phrase “Waterfall of Stars.” See example below. While reading a YA story recommended by our teen called The Barren Grounds by David A. Robertson, I came across this phrase and thought it was beautiful. Haikus don’t officially have titles, though if you prefer to save your syllables you may use it that way.

Yellow tulips dance
Beset by wind’s tango tune
Waterfall of stars.
–Rebecca Cuningham 5/09/23
I look forward to all your wonderful creativity in the meanings you find in those words. Rated G, please. Turn in your poems or add your link below by noon Chicago time May 15. Please use the keyword #ffpoemapop ¡Gracias! –Rebecca

Reto poético de mayo 2023
¡Espero con ganas nuestra fiesta de versos de mayo! Este mes escribiremos un haikú (formato 5/7/5 sílabas) usando la frase “cascada de estrellas” o “cascada estrellar”. Mientras leía el libro The Barren Grounds (Las tierras baldías) por David A. Robertson, encontré esta frase y me pareció muy linda. Los haikú no tienen títulos oficialmente, pero si quieres conservar tus sílabas, puedes usarla de esta manera.
Ejemplo de haikú:
Tulipanes ámbares
Tango de viento
Cascada estrellar
–traducción por Rebecca Cuningham
Estoy contenta, pensando en toda la creatividad que demostrarían en los significados que encuentran en esta frase. Para todas las audiencias por favor. Entrega tu poema o el enlace al poema en tu sitio antes del 15 mayo. Favor de usar la clave #ffpoemapop .
¡Gracias! –Rebecca
A beautiful line
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Thanks, Sadje. Glad it struck a chord with you too. Look forward to your poem. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Rebecca
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Marvelous theme and lovely haiku Rebecca!
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Thank you, Suzette! Hope you’ll have time for the challenge this month 🙂 You speak haiku so beautifully.
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You are most kind thank you for the invite Rebecca. A pleasure!!
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I am so bad at writing haiku’s! I always get it wrong!
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Line 1: “I am so bad at
Line 2: writing haiku’s! I always
Line 3: get it wrong!” she says.
Your comment was almost a haiku, Carol Anne!
17 syllables
5: I know you can write
7: a haiku for the challenge
5: I believe in you.
I always count syllables on my fingers. I subtract words until I have the right number.
Hope you’ll join in the fun. 🙂 R
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I count syllables
On my fingers just like you.
Then it becomes right.
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No, I think people’s minds work in different ways. Also, my friend has a pronounced sight impairment which I imagine would make it more challenging to put a syllabic poem together.
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Beautiful Rebecca. I look forward to reading everyone’s poetry 😁
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Thanks, Brenda. Me too.
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You should participate
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Not this year. I dont have the time to learn/experiment. This is the busiest time of year now until the end of term
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She does such challenges monthly!!
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Ok maybe later in the year
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we still have 7.5 months in this year
so good luck
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I see I’ll be monitored 😝
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Devang is sharp, he’ll keep tabs. 🙂 Hope you’ll do it for the fun of creating, when you have time.
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Just don’t make me do it in Spanish 🫣
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English is good too. 😉
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Thank you 😊 my Spanish is a bit rusty
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Thanks for your promotion, Devang.
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😝
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Good to hear, look forward to your participation.
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Such a beautiful turn of phrase! Loved it 🥰
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Thanks, Aggie, glad you liked it. I’m reading Robertson’s sequel, The Great Bear, now. Looking for the next gem.
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Great idea! 👍
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How I love this blogging community! I just ran across Aggie’s gorgeous haiku based on your challenge. Love your haiku, too, Rebecca. What an evocative phrase you picked! An aside–you’ll appreciate this–my sister and I are currently planning a visit to Barcelona, just for a couple days (after we spend a few in Paris and before we visit my brother’s family in Vigo) this summer. My only demand–that I can catch some flamenco, of course!
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Thanks for reading our haikus. Barcelona sounds fab! Gaudi cathedral ahoy!
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Looking forward to this challenge
I love how people from different part of world work on their poems and you share them, Best wishes
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Thank you faithful reader and commenter, Devang.
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🙇🏻♂️
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⭐️
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Good morning from India🔆
How are you feeling this fine evening ?
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Buenos días, amigo. 🌞 I am doing well, thanks, about to go to sleep. What are your plans today?
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I have no such plan
I’m about to leave for gym
Then rest will be same 😝
शुभरात्रि मित्र।। 🌝
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Have a good workout. Thanks for the Hindi greeting. I looked it up; a good night message.
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😝
Buenas noches
Remember to smile
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Yes, even when I’m sleeping 💤 🙂
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Dewdrops on tulip.
Shining in the spring sunlight.
A waterfall of stars.
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Very nice, VM. Thanks for participating!
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Sounds great! ✍🏻
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Hope you can join us this month.
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I hope so too! You’re on my calendar. 😊 Thank you.
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Excellent 🙂
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Hi, Rebecca! I’m interested in submitting mine, but can I put it in the comments?
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Great, Rebecca! Yes, thanks that’s fine. 🙂
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Thanks for the prompt, Rebecca. Here’s mine https://graceofthesun.com/shower-of-light/
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Thank you, Grace, appreciate your lovely contribution!
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Truly my pleasure, Rebecca.💕
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Hi Rebecca,
Here’s mine
http://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2023/05/12/may-2023-poetry-challenge-falling-stars/
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Thank you, Sadje, stalwart poet and blogger friend of the Milky Way!
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Thanks a lot! You’re so kind.
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You’re welcome:)
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🤩🤩🤩
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My haiku poem for the poetry challenge: https://wherestoriescansparktheirmagic.wordpress.com/2023/05/12/for-me-you-one-day-i-will-be-yours/
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Welcome to the poetry challenge! Thanks for your G rated poem of love. Well done. 🙂
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Here’s mine, Rebecca:
Dying petals dance,
faded blossoms flutter down –
waterfall of stars.
I should have blogged it, I know, but I couldn’t find any suitable images. I’m on the case though.
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Thanks, Margaret! Love your images of petals as stars!
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Thanks. White petals always look that way to me.
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Cascada estrellar — this is even more beautiful in Spanish!
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Thanks, Kim. Spanish made me fall hard for poetry.
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I can imagine!
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Waterfall of stars
Splashing wildy against my
Astronomers mind
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Thank you lovely poetic scientist!
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Aw Shucks! 🙂
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Hi Rebecca, thanks for the challenge. I posted my entry this morning. This was fun! :). https://hartinspirations.com/2023/05/13/falling/
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Thanks, Susan. Love your perspective, another scientific woman!
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Thank you for the opportunity to participate, Rebecca.
Here is mine: https://myinspiredlife.org/2023/05/13/thirsty/
🌵🌠💖
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Thanks for participating, desert woman. 💜
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My pleasure! 😊 🏜️🌟
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Hi, great prompt! Here’s my submission.
https://wordpress.com/read/blogs/217190484/posts/762
I also enjoyed reading your haiku, and found it intriguing how much different our interpretations of the prompt were. Yours is very lively. 😄
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Thank you, Caffeinated Philosophy! Appreciate you joining in. What country do you write from?
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My pleasure, Rebecca! I’m writing from Finland.
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Great! Welcome to Fake Flamenco. 🙂
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Here’s mine: https://oddsends707138946.wordpress.com/2023/05/14/water-falls-on-scars-by-britta-benson/
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Greetings Rebecca!
Here’s my link: http://suzetteb.home.blog/2023/05/14/waterfall-of-stars-haiku-2023-may-poetry-challenge/
Have a lovely weekend!
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Just call me Waterfall of Stars – love the concept as emotion.
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Thank you for the inspiration! Here’s mine:
https://jjjinteractivebooks.com/2023/05/14/a-waterfall-of-stars/
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Thanks for your poem! Look forward to perusing your site.
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Loved this challenge, Rebecca. Here is mine 🙂
https://themumblery.com/2023/05/14/superfluous/
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